Thursday, August 11, 2011

Could you find two places in this passage where a semi-colon could be used?

From the top of the cliff Leanne could see miles out over the glittering sea. On a clear day you could see France. Inevitably her mind would stray to the kinds of journeys she would make and the thousands, if not millions, of people she would meet. Her mother, watching from the bay window of their house, would worry about her dreamy daughter Leanne, of course, knew her mother was keeping watch but kept stubbornly turned to the vastness of the sea. If she turned back, it would be an acceptance of her mothers narrow vision, a defeat.

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